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ENGL 1100
Expository essay
The amount of time, the children are watching a television has
dramatically increased over the time resulting the children to become more
inactive and less creative. Children enjoy most of the things that they see in
the televisions and they tend to believe whatever they saw and heard to be
true. Meanwhile, the television commercials and other programs are directly
targeting children and exploiting them. They are persuaded through false
information or engaging characters to watch televisions again and again and
they are also taught about nagging tactics to compel their parents to let them
watch and satisfy their needs. Journalist Eric Schlosser, in his incisive
account wrote about how children are spending most of their time. He states,
“The typical child now spends about twenty-one hours a week watching television
- roughly one and a half months of TV every year……...About one-quarter of the
American children between the ages of two and five have a TV in their room.” Schlosser
believes that the number of television programs and commercials targeted
directly towards children has been significantly increasing that they are
spending more and more time watching televisions and as a result are becoming
more inactive and less creative. Avoiding commercials and regulating time to
watch televisions would decrease the amount of time a child spends on watching
television.
In this modern, technological and competitive world, everybody is
busy in certain things. Herbert Spencer coined the phrase “survival of the
fittest”, which is very true and can be related to present context. The world
is being very competitive and only those that struggle and win fit well. And
obviously, the parents are not being able to give enough time to their children
also and each other that is deteriorating the family bonding. They are working
more and hard to fulfill the materialistic needs of their children and
themselves. Moreover, they seek for certain ways to keep their children busy so
that they can be free for themselves. Allowing children to watch television is
the most common way to do so. They let their children to watch television most
of the time. Some parents are not even unaware about how much their children
are spending their time on television. Mostly, children watch cartoons on
television and very soon they are addicted to those cartoons. Once addicted,
they will be willing to skip anything, even their food to watch their favorite
cartoons. And due to the number of cartoons there are, the list of their
favorite cartoons is large. As I have seen, these days’ children often tend to
sleep and wake up late as trying to finish watching the cartoons. It is not
only killing their time, but also hampering their creativities and bonding. Due
to lack of enough time to stay, talk and share, the family bonding weakens as a
result, sometime the structure of the family dismantles. Author Marie Winn on
her book, “Television: The Plug-in Drug states “Of course, families today still
do things together at times: ……But their ordinary life together is diminished……
and the parents have their peaceful dinner together.” Winn mentions that today
the amount of time a family spends together to talk about each other, share new
ideas, plans, and progresses, express the feeling of love, care and affection
have diminished.
On the other hand, “the television companies are also broadcasting
advertising targeted directly at children got twenty-four hours a day and 80
percent of all television viewing by kids are cartoons” as mentioned by
Schlosser. The commercials are compelling children to constantly nag their
parents and fulfill their needs. And the nagging tactics are also taught to
children as Schlosser states “James U. McNeal “teaches children how to nag
their parents in his book Kids as Customers (1992).”
Children are learning things that will benefit them for a while
rather than that will be forever helpful and effective. The base of the
children weakens if they are let to watch television all the time besides
encouraging them to be engage in learning and doing creative works. Not only,
it will waste their time but also make them uncompetitive, dependent and
unmanageable in both present and future. Surprisingly, children, these days
have very less IQ than what the children of the earlier time used to have when
they would be give very less or no time for television. They would play, learn
and share together in the natural environment, unlike today where everybody is
busy in their digital worlds. As it is said, “Time is more precious than Gold”.
We have to know the value of time and keep track of what we are doing or what
we are letting others to do and hence, use the time effectively because “Time
and Tide waits for none.”
I completely agree with your thesis. I believe that children should not waste their lives in front of a television especially if it is affecting their eating and sleeping habits. You have a well formatted essay that included key points that supports your thesis throughout your essay. But, I think that the point of view of the opposing side should be added as well. This is because if you were to deny the opposing point of view, it would strengthen your argument at the same time. It is a win-win situation. Even without it though, this was a very well structured and informative essay.
ReplyDeleteThis essay had a great impact on me. I learned the essence of family bonding and time management. It made me think freely and realize how I was bonded with my parents before and now. Schlosser and Winn have nicely reminded us to realize the essence of family bonding that is very relevant at present.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your expository essay. I agree with your thesis statement because you use great examples of how tv has been affecting children. You were well detailed on the side as to why t.v is bad but i believe that adding your own experiences could also help the reader understand how t.v really had an effected. I also believe that writing the opposing side view can help strengthen your argument as James had said. But overall you did a great job proving the message across, it was informative.
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