Summary and Response-A More Perfect Union_Raven King

A More Perfect Union

In his speech "A More Perfect Union", Senator Barack Obama addresses questions about race and equality through his presidential campaign and in general argues that nation needs unity in order to progress. He supports his claims by presenting the struggles that all Americans face both past and present regardless of their race. Obama’s purpose is to urge readers to eliminate racial division for the benefit of all Americans. His audience likely consists of those interested in uniting a nation that needs improvements as is evident through his references to race and equality; he addresses readers with a tone that is forceful and informative.

Instead of dividing issues accordingly, he addresses that the problems of our nation affects everyone. No matter the race, ethnicity, or sexual orientation it is the responsibility of Americans as a whole to come together in order to create change. The Constitution was created to push America in the direction of equality for all and far from segregation. Senator Obama explains that the Constitution was only a stepping-stone to the change that is to come, although it focused on equality for all Americans, slavery was still allowed during this time period.

Those who fought for the rights that Americans have today, knew that the nation wouldn't be perfect but would move closer to it. They protested and voiced their opinions about the injustice and didn't stop until that problem changed.  Now Obama feels the need to run for president because of his belief that Americans have a common goal and that is to become united and that we can help fulfill that goal. The future generations are his inspiration because their openness to change and action has already made a difference in the election. By referring to people of all walks of life, Senator Obama blurs the lines that were once created.

I initially agreed with the points made by Senator Obama in the way that he brings attention to racial problems in our society that have been overlooked instead of repaired. After discussing the topic in class, I can only agree more. It is clear after reading Obama’s speech that he has carefully thought about the overall message he wants to deliver to his audience. He brings light to the fact that everyone has their own struggle and is fighting their own battle, no matter what race or social class. Obama delivers his speech effectively, as he informs the audience about the changes that are necessary but makes it clear that effort from everyone is required to do so. Instead of grouping people by race and ethnicity, Obama addresses them as a whole without making one group superior than the others.

By including his own background and personal experiences, Obama makes his argument stronger and the message more relatable. People tend to respond positively when they feel a personal connection to a candidate because it shows their human side. Usually politicians are known for selling a dream. They will tell voters everything they want to hear and give an endless list of things they hope to change once in office. But most of the time, the promises they make fail to become reality.

As a minority myself, I have struggled with trusting that change will come. I understand that others may not be fighting the same battle as I am, but as a whole, we all have something to deal with. Reading Obama’s speech helped me to realize that it takes more than myself to create change; it takes unity and teamwork. In this day in age, everyone is focused on themselves and there is less of a concern about the people around us and the world we live in. It is our responsibility as Americans to be the change we want to see and that takes time.
            Senator Obama speaks heavily on subjects regarding race that have yet to be resolved in our society. He focuses on the fact that issues of race and segregation are still holding people back. These problems have merely been swept under the rug until another dramatic event brings it back out. After the ending of slavery, many African Americans have felt the limitations in their opportunities in the work field and other aspects of their lives. The past issues of slavery and segregation has caused people to lose sight of the fact that these problems will not just affect one particular group of people but the society as a whole. If we continue to have the same mindset that is present today, it will only hinder our ability to move forward. Once Americans decide to leave the topic of discrimination in the past, there will be more opportunities for the future generations to come. Therefore, for that promised perfect union to be a success, a unity within the people needs to exist.