Adrienne Watson
Kid Kustomers: Summary
and Response
Investigative journalist, Eric Schlosser,
in his article “Kid Kustomers”, published in 2011, addresses the topic of child
marketing and argues that the media has more influence over children than their
parents. By supplying the reader with information about early marketing
practices and the increase in child marketing groups, Schlosser builds his
claims about companies increasing sales by directing their marketing towards
children. Schlosser wishes to convey to readers the importance of awareness in
order to limit children’s exposure to marketing ploys. Because of the author’s
authoritative tone, it seems he writes for both professional and general
audiences.
Schlosser notes that most American children
spend twenty one hours a week watching television. This exposes them to more
than thirty thousand commercials. Schlosser describes the different marketing
strategies used on children. The companies’ aim is to increase, not just
present sales, but also future sales. They hope early exposure will encourage
“brand loyalty” and lead to a lifetime of purchases. Schlosser also describes
the different ways company marketing teams analyze children, staging slumber
parties, forming children’s groups and analyzing children’s artwork to name a
few. The language Schlosser uses gives
the impression that marketers are spying on children. He mentions James
McNeal’s belief of a nagging tactics. The use of these techniques makes the
children persuade and beg their parents to buy things that they desire.
I find Schlosser’s argument agreeable.
Children
do not know that the commercials and ads are false statements. They often
cannot distinguish between a commercial and an actual TV program. In a grocery
store, if you go down the cereal aisle the cereals most desired by children are
on the bottom. The cereals are put at a certain height to catch a child’s
attention. Schlosser is trying to inform parents how often their children are
exposed to advertisers. He talks about how Joe Camel, the mascot of a cigarette
company, is easily recognized by nearly all six year old children. Ethically it
sounds wrong, but from a business standpoint it is brilliant. People need to
sell their products and targeting children, who you know will be enticed by the
product and ask their parents to it get for them, is so obvious and simple. Of
course this also means cigarettes and alcohol companies can target children as
well. I believe those commercials should be directed at children because the
younger people start smoking and drinking, the more likely they will become
addicted. But it makes sense why industries target
children for their commercials and advertisements.
Your essay is really good. It is really well-organized, but I think it's kind of short. I think you could extend the essay more in the summary part of your essay. You could add more quotes from the article, so the readers could understand more clearly about what the article is about. Also, like Professor Moore said that in the rhetorical precis, question number 3, you could add more information about that. About the purpose of the author to tell the readers his or her idea. So, your writing could longer. Also, In the response part, you could explain more about why you agree with the author, by giving your own opinion or feeling toward the article. Overall, good job !
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